Yesterday we learn about haiku poems.Haiku Poem has to have 17 syllables.5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second line and 5 syllables in the last line.And remember it does not have to rime.
This is my haiku poem
the waves march like army's
The sea bakited the sand.
waves rumbled and clashed.
1 comments:
Kia Ora Daniel
It seems like you don't have a full understanding of a Haiku poem. You have the rules right but you didn't do it right. I did a Haiku poem too, mine went like this.
Bubbles forming fast
Surfboards soaring through the sea.
Ice-creams are melting.
Was it hard for you to think of a Haiku poem.
Keep trying though! :)
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